小学一年级英语作文:My New Teacher

文中用词稍显贫乏，单词拼写方面也要加强；简单句偏多了；衔接词汇很少，建议加强过渡词和连接词的积累。

My teather is very handsome men. He has short hair. two big black eyes and a red mouth. He voice is better. He is good at singing. He is clever man. He Likes reading books. playing computer games and chess. He is also nice. He often helps us. Ous classmates like him very much.