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可适当增加复合句和从句的使用；采用了简单的衔接手法，行文流畅；作者能较熟练、灵活地使用词汇，建议要多使用高级词汇。
The advantage of save money Nowadays, everyday we are consuming, to buy clothes, foods and any other things, so we must cost much money to buy anything what we want, and you must think that is wasted. So we should be a smart consumer. To being careful with money is a great help for us, and it has many advantages of saving money. First, as students, we have not ability to earn extra money, all of our money is coming from parents, and we should even more save our expenditure. If we did that, we can reduce the burden of parents, and your parents must be pround of your good behavior. There is a kind of consuming behavior called impulsive consumption, If we could learn how to save money and control our consuming behavior, and we can keep from impulsive consumption. Second, be careful with money is great help for our future. We will go into the society in the future, at then tiem, and we need use much money for ourselves. For example, buying a apartment, getting marriage and take care of your parents. So being careful with money is important and beneficial to us. Being careful with money, we need control our expenditure, what kind of thing should bought and not bought. When you wanna buy something that is expensive and you had better to think prudently.
