回复:Smith回复自己将于近日回国处理公司要事,不能前往,表示歉意。
【精析】
此篇作文应为回复邀请的信函。在这类信函中要注意信的格式。时间应该写在右上角,称呼应顶格并首字母大写。正文要写清楚应邀还是拒绝,若拒绝,要写清楚理由,并向邀请人致歉。
文中词汇表达贫乏,但是单词拼写做的不错;正确句子比例较高,适当增加复杂句的使用,文章会更出色;过渡词和衔接词使用欠丰富,层次欠清晰;连词使用偏少。
Dear Wangli, 7th July My wife and me are so glad to receive the invitation of you and your wife to take part in your son's birthday.However,I am afraid of unable to take part in.I'm feel so sorry and pity.The reason why I couldn't the party is that I must go to my country to deal with some urgent problems of company.I'm so sorry.In advance happy birthday to you son. Best wishes. John Smith.