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字数：300 满分：100分
文中词汇表达比较多样，能多用高级词汇就更好了；可适当增加复合句和从句的使用；采用了简单的衔接手法，行文流畅。
The advantage of save money Nowadays, everyday we are consuming, to buy clothes, foods and any other things, so we must cost much money to buy anything what we want, and you must think that is wasted. So we should be a smart consumer. To being careful with money is a great help for us, and it has many advantages of saving money. First, as students, we have no ability to earn extra money, all of our money come from parents, and we should even more save our expenditure. If we did that, we can reduce the burden of parents, and your parents must be proud of your good behavior. There is a kind of consumptive behavior called impulsive consumption, if we could learn how to save money and control our consumptive behavior, and we can keep from impulsive consumption. Second, be careful with money is a great help for our future. We will go into the society in the future, at that time, and we need use much money for ourselves. For example, buying an apartment, getting marriage and take care of your parents. So being careful with money is important and beneficial to us. Being careful with money, we need control our expenditure, what kind of thing should buy and not buy. When you wanna buy something that is expensive and you had better think prudently.
