小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

单词拼写做的很好，请注意积累词汇量；加强一些长句和复杂句的使用；文中基本没有过渡词和衔接词，建议增加衔接词汇的积累。

I have a good friend. His name is Jim. He is from Fuzhou,China. He is 21 year old. He has a black car, but I'm not. He has many money. His family is rich. He has a sister. Her name is Make. She is my best friend. My friend likes sport,such as play basketball and swimming. We are best friend.