托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第51篇:住在乡下是否比城市好

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Owing to the improvement of trafic and fundamental basement of rural area, in my opinion, it is better for people to live in city. With the rapid increasment of car, trafic jam is often happpende in the city, especially during the time of going and backing to work, so you have to spend much more time on the road. Another problom of living in city is the more and more serious air pollution, because it is bad for people's body when you are explosed in the seriously polluted environment. Although existing so many problems about living in city, there are still more and more people to live around a lot of people, owing to the good conditions of education and fundamental basement. If you choose to live around a lot of people, your children could get better eduction chance, your family could get better doctoral condiction. However, Living in a rural area is better for people now, for the rapid development of internet and fundamental basement of village. You could buy things from internet at any time , and go shopping and hospital conveniently through drive a car owing to developed road of village. The most important advantages of living in a rural area is that you can breath fresh air, and you can enjoy the green foods on your own farm. Base on above reasons, I think living in a rural is better than living around a lot of people.