小学三年级英语作文:My grandfather

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My grandfather is very old. He is so kind. He is a happy old man. He likes smile. He tall is 160cm I think. He hair is white. He likes to wear shirt very much. He usually read book in evening. He ofter goes to park on foot. He likes drink tea too. I like him.