加强一些长句和复杂句的使用;作者词汇量有些小,要注意检查拼写错误;建议在衔接词汇方面加强积累。
I have a good friend.His name is Tom.He has a big eyes and he is taller than me.I usually go to school with him.I think he is an outgoing person.In addition,he always help our class mates.we all lik him. One day.I go to school with him,we saw a cat lying on the road.