文中词汇表达较丰富恰当,但学术词汇稍显不足;有效地使用了语句间的衔接成分;适当增加一些从句的使用,会为文章添彩。
Dear Mr.Wright, I am writing this letter for the purpose of informing you of my decision to resign. After several years of work here,I find it inappropriate for me to stick to my position any longer.First of all,I intend to move to my hometown to live permanently with my family so that I can take good care of them.In addition,I want to create my own business,which is my long-cherished wish.In a word,I have made up my mind to resign from the job after much deliberation. Looking back upon my four-year experience in this organization,I have had a very happy and enjoyable time working with you and other colleagues,from whom I have received a lot of help and have learnt much.Please accept my heartfelt gratitude as well as my regret for any inconvenience caused. Yours sincerely, Zhang Wei