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恰当的使用了过渡词和衔接词，衔接手法做的很棒；文中词汇表达较灵活丰富，不过请检查文章的单词拼写；可适当增加复杂句和从句的使用。
Happiness is the emotion which our people want to be. Some time happiness is so easy. such as paly games have fun finish the homework or have a dilicious dinner with friends. We can find out many matters about happiness. But sometimes happiness is far from us. such as we are poor to eating have some trouble with the work or ger a ill. There are also many things let me down. So how to became to happiness. That a problem which is easy to say but hard to do. I think the happiness is do things following our heart and meeting the society rules. For example today we are required to doing work quickly and well that is the society rules. The other side the job which is we like to do that is means follwing our heart. all above happiness have two sides. That is what to do and how to do .If we deal with this two things well we must be happiness.
