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题目要求：
Today，the quality of life in large cities is decreasing . What are the causes and solutions?
题目讲解：
报告类题目，难度不大，思路要点在于解决方法与原因分析的对应性。
第一段：开头
第二段：原因——环境污染，健康问题，工作压力
第三段：解决——绿色科技+绿化，健康意识+运动设施，学会自我减压
第四段：结尾
采用了简单的衔接手法，行文流畅；注意句式在文中的变化，加强一些从句的使用，文章会更棒；希望高级词汇的使用能更熟练一些，还要加强单词拼写的检查。
Today,the quality of life in lage cities is decreasing. what are the reasons hinding behind the phenomenons.In my opijnion,there are three parts concered the problems.The first one is the pollution of environment,this included air,water,and soil,even the genes.The second one is healthy problems,so many boday issues that can destroy your holl lifer ,such as the diabet,cancer and so on.The last one is the pressures of works ,this just a reflect of hard living conditions. How can i resolve the worse conditions?I think the green technoilogy and the high coveradge rate are the fundmental ways,then the common opinions about healthy is important which included psychical and physical parts, a good public direction is necessary.So the construction of funfmental spaces is necessary.The last one is alleviate press bye myself,we need do myself's favour. we will solve the problems with the common stuggle of different apartments.
