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2012年6月9日雅思大作文真题:新闻与人们生活的关系

发布时间:2013-08-07 15:51浏览次数:2677
要求:

【题目要求

Some people think news is in no connection with people's lives, therefore, it is a complete waste of time to read the news in the newspaper or watch TV news. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

【题目翻译】

有些人认为新闻跟人们的生活关系不大,因此,读报纸或看电视新闻完全是浪费时间。

你在多大程度上同意或不同意这一观点?

【题目关键词】

1-news

2-in no connection with

3-a complete waste of time

4-read the news in the newspaper

5-watch TV news

【写作小贴士】

此类题目是典型的argumentative essay/report,可以遵照双边类文章的写作模式,也可以按单边类方法写作,建议单边写作,现从read news in the newspaper和watch TV news好的角度着手,首先,Reading news in the newspaper or watching TV news give families something to bond over. Both newspaper and television have led to some great conversations. Often, talking about something that occurred in a newspaper or TV show will lead to discussions of real life situations. If this is not a benefit, I do not know what is 。其次,News in the newspaper or TV news are both educational and in formative. News can be as educational as going to school。最后,We can learn about different people and places. Newspaper or TV news opens up the world, whether through watching TV news or newspaper news with multicultural characters!

【写作语汇一览表】

1-inculcate a great habit like reading in someone

2-become a passion for someone

3-one’s perseverance of this trend

4-the mounting pressure of work

5-keep someone engrossed

6-introduce someone to the different cultures around the globe

7-give you a glimpse into other cultures and places of the world

8-reduce boredom

9-break the monotony of a lazy, uncreative and boring life

10-explore a new world filled with information and ingenuity

11-make your vision blurry

12-for a wide variety of reasons

用户的作文(系统评分84.5分
评语:

语句间的衔接成分用的不错,同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富;作者词汇基础扎实,拼写也很棒;作者句法很棒,合理使用了复杂句。

用户练习作文:

Generally speaking, except the residents in absolute remote and isolated areas and those strict disciplined monk/nuns in monastery, the average from all walks of life have to increasingly rely on news of different channels, such as TV and newspaper. Therefore, personally, I completely disagree that it is to waste time to ingests the news. Most of us live in the secular world, and this world heavily depends upon the news and various information, because they are shaping and affecting our daily life, work, study and business; even we can say that without smooth and effective information or news exchange, either the independent individuals or any institutions or organizations would inevitably go blind as a person invalid in hearing and seeing. Let’s see an very simply case: it is quite common for urban and rural citizens to have a smart phone which can install apps with different functions, and these apps or other platforms have accompany you from the morning call to bedtime, not mention the internet connections in your office or workplace which enables you to explore much more news in an easier way. News not only provides us more topics to enriches our dialogue, can also supply us with enormous quantity of educative and inspiring information, from which we can benefit a lot in a wide range of categories. It can play a great role in unifying the family members when they have a commonly shared topic, and this is very important because the prevalent Phone Freak can even turn the kins or friends to strangers. Furthermore, as the terrorism activities become rampant, the timely news on this shall be greatly helpful for those planning for tourism abroad. Simply sum up as follows: our life is surrounded by, changed by and reshaped by the sea of news, and each of us is both the recipient and maker of news, therefore, I fully disagree that point of view: it is a waste of time to read news in newspaper or TV. The news will do us good if only we can be a good source of news and utilize the news in a positive way.

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