2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

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My hometown is a city which had an old history. the fist famous tourist area is the Terra-Cotta Warriors,it is one of the eight miracle of world. it will show you the smart and brave of chinese peolple. the food is also delicious in Xi An , many kands of the flour food you can eat at here.