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2012年12月英语四级作文真题:Education pays

发布时间:2013-05-17 11:48浏览次数:46265
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2012年12月英语四级作文材料来源于美国劳工部网站的一份统计表,本次作文材料截取了其中一部分数据,并对时间做了修改,以下为材料原型,供大家参考。
Education pays...
Education pays in higher earnings and lower unemployment rates
Note: Data are for persons age 25 and over. Earnings are for full-time wage and salary workers.

Source: Bureau of Labor Statistics, Current Population Survey.

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复杂句采用很棒;采用了简单的衔接手法,行文流畅;希望高级词汇的使用能更熟练一些,还要加强单词拼写的检查。

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Nowadays,with the techology and society develping fastly,more and more employers attach importance to education degree,which means the employment rates is directly associated with the euducation degree. We can see from the graph,beteew the people that less than high school diploma and people with prefessional degree,there is a trend that the education pays in higher earnings and lower unemployment rates.What' more ,it is four times that the salary for professional people as high as high as for less than high school diploma.But there is a intersting thing that doctoral degree people's earing are less than professional degree in average . However, this graph shows that in order to face the intense competition,all the social members should keep hard in updating themselves.

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