2012年12月英语四级作文真题:Education pays

复杂句采用很棒；采用了简单的衔接手法，行文流畅；希望高级词汇的使用能更熟练一些，还要加强单词拼写的检查。

Nowadays,with the techology and society develping fastly,more and more employers attach importance to education degree,which means the employment rates is directly associated with the euducation degree. We can see from the graph,beteew the people that less than high school diploma and people with prefessional degree,there is a trend that the education pays in higher earnings and lower unemployment rates.What' more ，it is four times that the salary for professional people as high as high as for less than high school diploma.But there is a intersting thing that doctoral degree people's earing are less than professional degree in average . However, this graph shows that in order to face the intense competition,all the social members should keep hard in updating themselves.