2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

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In China, a province call Guangdong where is my hometown.If I foreign friend be going to visit my hometown,I will take him to visit the first interestingplace call Danxia mountain ,where lacal in Shaoguan city.In Danxia mountain,we can climb mountain to exercise physical.When in sunset,we can see beautiful scence of sunset,that is very glory!The second interestingplace I will take him to Shenzhen city,where have many thing good fun and many pretty scence.For example,Shenzhen bay is have very beautiful scence,where is a bay.Long long ago,Shenzhen is a small town,people make a living for fish.Until China the reform and open up policy,Shenzheng began fast develop.Nowadays,Shenzhen became a big city,but also contantly develop.Why introduce Shenzhen than Shaoguan?Because I grown up in Shenzhen,I have deep emotion in Shenzhen.Hey ,friend,let me take you visit my hometown!