2.然后以约120个词就 “过度依赖电脑的弊端”的主题发表看法,
并包括如下要点:
沉迷于电脑对学生造成的不利影响;作者词汇使用较为丰富熟练,单词拼写方面要更仔细;可适当增加复杂句和从句的使用;文章上下文衔接不是很紧凑,结构缺少组织。
With the development of society,company becomes more and more popular .however,it also bring some problems. In many ways people seem have become the servant of computers. personly,I am not favor of the computers.my friends and my classmates use computer frequently.now,students prefer useing computers than self-thinking in sloving problems. if they are abandoned in computers,they would notwant to study any more.what's more,longtime playing computer would make them low-eyesights.