2011年12月英语四级作文真题:坚强的意志

文中词汇表达贫乏，但是单词拼写做的不错；可适当增加复杂句和从句的使用；行文稍显不流畅，应增加文中衔接词的使用。

Nothing Succeeds Without a Strong Will Many people want to be success,but how to make it?As far as I am concern,if you want to be success,must have strong will.A phrase said:only strong will person can finish great mission.Thus，Students as that if you didn’t hard study,you can't become a useful man.