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As we konw,nothing can easy to do,especilly as a senior three students .we have some troubles.Some students tell me that they are worried about their English,and they dont konw how to learn it well,they are lose their confidencen. English is a skill to talk to different people,we can use English in different ways,so we must learn it well.but,how to learn English? I will give you all some advice.The most important is that you must find a proper way to learn English.Secondly,you can call help for your English teacher,and let he or she gives you some advice.Last but no least,keep a good habit,like read English books,listen English songs,watch English tvs. I hope it can help you all.