文中有几处错误的句子,部分句子偏简单;词汇表达较灵活准确,高级词汇使用过少,另外注意文中个别的拼写错误;衔接成分太少,文章结构欠佳。
Dear David: How are you those days? I'm glad that you are going to come to Beijing. I'm willing help you on how to study chinese.As we all know,Chinese are very difficult,beause its widely content.So i'll give you some practical ways.The most important thing is that you should learn chinese spell properly,and practise it as ofen as possible.Second,Talking to chinese people is a good way for you to improve your chinese.Last but no least,You can watch chinese shows,listen chinese songs,read chinese books. If you do above this,I think can help you to learn chinese well. Best wishes to you yours Wang Ming
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