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2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第3套):立刻得出结论

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:15浏览次数:40876
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题目:看到什么、听到什么就立刻得出结论是不明智的。
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全文结构较为严谨,应适当增加文中衔接词的使用;可适当增加复杂句和从句的使用;作者词汇使用较为丰富熟练,单词拼写方面要更仔细。

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It's a common sense that we prefer to believe what we saw and heared rather than what others said.We are accustomed to reaching an agreement that reality is insightful ,directly and surficial.But is it ture?Definitely not.What we saw and heared tend to be different from the genenius situations,so it's unwise that we get a conclusion immediately through it. But what should we do ? Firstly ,we should keep calm when we saw a few things that is unbelievable or impossible.We are supposed to figure out the fact before get some conclusion.Secondly I suggest that we had better listen to the explanation of others and learn to observe the surrondings and analyze the case. To conclude,we shouldn't get the conclusion without any thinking.We can see all the things through our eyes,but it's not probable that we can see the minds and facts through it.The find of anything needs us to spare no efforts to make use of our brains and so on to help us to make better conclusion.

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