2014年初中毕业升学考试英语作文集锦170:Wonderland

简单句偏多了；衔接成分太少，文章结构欠佳；作者词汇积累很好，但拼写检查还需加强。

Last day.I got a dream.I dreamed Alices.She is a very beautiful girl.She showed me around the wonderland.There are all kinds of flowers.To my surprise.They can speak.There are many anomals fiying in the sky.I also want to fiy.But even if i tried my best to fiy,I still cound not fiy to the sky.I felt very sad.However.She gave me a sperical clothes that i can fiy.I felt very exciting.But suddenly.I fail down from the sky.I shouted help help.Finally,I woke,and it was a dream.