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字数：300 满分：100分
单词拼写很棒，可考虑增加高级词汇的使用量；可适当增加复合句和从句的使用；文章结构不错，使用了丰富的衔接词和过渡词。
Saving Money Some people regard students's ways of saving money as a unwise way. I personally can't agree with this idea. In my opinion, I support that students should put some money on the side in case of a rainy day. To start with, parents give students more money with the development of the life standards,meanwhile, grandparents also lavish care on us and give us some money for many students are the only children in their families,which may led students to have extra money beyond their consumption ,so saving money can be a good way to deal with those money. Secondly, students are easily affected by other people and have a sense to follow new fashionable trend, so they can form bad habits like extravagant expending. And they will even buy some things which are beyond their abilities. It goes without saying that saving money can prevent students from forming those bad habits. The last but not least,there is no doubt that our life is full of unexpected accidents.We must make full preparations in order to deal with them before these things happened. In conclusion, we should use wise ways to save money. Saving money doesn't mean that spend no money on shopping, on the opposite, it means students shop in a more intelligent way.
