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2009年9月英语六级作文真题:名字的重要性

发布时间:2013-05-18 00:37浏览次数:1736
要求:
题目 On the Importance of a Name
要求
1.有人认为名字(名称)不重要;
2.有人认为非常重要;
3.你认为呢?
字数:150满分:100分
用户的作文(系统评分83.0分
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作者学术词汇使用比较准确,词汇表达较丰富,但仍需增加词汇积累;使用了部分简单的长难句,可适当增加一些复杂的长句;文章层次较为清晰。

用户练习作文:

It is known to us that a name plays an important role in our daily life and even makes a profound impact in our future.however people's attitudes vary from person to person. Some hold the idea that it is important for us to get a perfect name.they take it seriously and believe that a good name equals a fortune and one who has a good name can achieve great success in their job hunting.others maintain that we are going to far to treat this issue.they argue that a name is only a symbol of an individual and it is meaningless to attach more importance on it. From my perspective,taking what has been mentioned above into consideration,we should pay more attention to the development of our children rather than anything else.only in this way can we make a difference to our children and make a bright future to our children.

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