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2008年6月21日英语四级作文真题:互联网

发布时间:2013-05-17 11:11浏览次数:2262
要求:
Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic The Internet. You should write at least 120 words according to the outline given below in Chinese: 
1. 有人认为网络可以让学习、工作更有效率 
2. 还有人认为网络让青少年沉迷,进而影响学习 
3. 你对于网络的看法
用户的作文(系统评分82.5分
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文章词汇使用较为恰当灵活,希望能更熟练地使用学术词汇有效地使用了语句间的衔接成分;使用了部分简单的长难句,可适当增加一些复杂的长句。

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Dear Mr.Wright, I am writing this letter for the purpose of informing you that I intend to resign from our corporation. After several years of the work here,I find it inappropriate for me to stick to my position any longer.First of all,I intend to move to my hometown to live permanently with my family so that I can take good care of them.In addition,I want to create my own business,which is my long-cherished hope.In a word,I have made up my mind to resign from the job after much deliberation. Looking back upon my four years experience in this organization,I had a very happy and enjoyable time worked with you and other colleagues,from whom I have received a lot of assistance and have learnt much.Please accept my heartfelt gratitude as well as my regret of any inconvenience caused. Yours sincerely, Zhang Wei

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