高一英语作文模拟题:我的家乡

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I used to live in a beautiful town with green trees around it. The river, running clean water, we can see fish is playing games. The houses are small and simple, but we like them. And the streets are narrow. Well the people live in a simple but happy life. However, now tall buildings and factories are all of around. All kinds of cars and trucks come and go on the roads, which bring convience in our daily life. But as the more developing in industry, the worse our environment become. Many trees are urgently decrease, and many kinds of fish are extinct. In order to have a beautiful home town, please stop pollution.