文章组织结构良好;句法知识不错,多多加强复杂句的练习;文章用词太过单一,且单词拼写错误较多。
I have a good friend.her name is liming,she is a beautiful gril with longhair and black eyes. she is outgoing and interested in travl,she is good at singing and her voice is charming. she is olso nice and often help us , so we all like her very much. and she is my best friend.