小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

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I have a good friend.her name is liming,she is a beautiful gril with longhair and black eyes. she is outgoing and interested in travl,she is good at singing and her voice is charming. she is also nice and often help us , so we all like her very much. and she is my best friend.