小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

文章衔接手法恰当；可适当增加从句的使用，注意文中的一些小错误；文中用词稍显贫乏，单词拼写还要加强。

I have a good friend.her name is liming,she is a beautiful gril with longhair and black eyes. She is outgoing and interested in travel,she is good at singing and her voice is charming. She is also nice and often helps us, so we all like her very much. and she is my best friend.