句法知识很棒,若增加一些从句的使用,文章会更出色;单词拼写做的很好,请注意积累词汇量;采用了简单的衔接手法,行文流畅。
I have a good friend.Her name is liming,she is a beautiful girl with longhair and black eyes. She is outgoing and interested in travel,she is good at singing and her voice is charming. She is also nice and often helps us, so we all like her very much and she is my best friend.