小学一年级英语作文:My New Teacher

采用了简单的衔接手法，行文流畅；文中单词拼写做的不错，另外再增加词汇量积累就更好了；可适当增加从句的使用，注意文中的一些小错误。

Our school comes a new teacher,his name is liming.he is a science teacher with strong body. He is very funny,my classmate very like him. He often wears a black shirt and brown pants. He also talk to us just like a friend,when we have some trouble,we willing to told him.Last of all,he is very kind,there is a class in the afterroom,we felt very happy.