采用了简单的衔接手法,行文流畅;可将文中的简单句转换为长句或者复杂句;文中单词拼写做的不错,另外再增加词汇量积累就更好了。
Our school comes a new teacher,his name is liming.He is a science teacher with strong body. He is very funny,my classmate like him very much. He often wears a black shirt and brown pants. He also talk to us just like a friend,when we have some trouble,we willing to told him.Last of all,he is very kind,there is a class in the afterroom,we felt very happy.