内容:本人在12月15日到22日在纽约举行的展览会期间了解到贵公司产品号为5670的新产品,非常感兴趣,请贵方发给我们一份价格单和说明书。感谢贵方的合作,希望我们可以建立贸易关系。
【高频词句】
1.price list and instruction价格单和说明书
2.establish business relationship建立贸易关系
拼写很棒,可适当增加高级词汇的使用;加强一些长句和复杂句的使用;语言不流畅。
Dear KPOHsales, How are you ? I will hold a shows in Newyork between fifteen and twenty-second September , during this time , I know that your company"s production called 5670,I am very interesting in it .Please send the price list and instruction .Thangk you for your help ,I hope we will establish business relationship. Sincerely, Hubin.