采用了简单的衔接手法,行文流畅;可适当增加学术词汇的使用量;可适当增加从句使用,注意极个别句子错误。
Dear Mr.Zhang, I am writing the letter to inform you of my decision to resign from my current position. There are a few factors involved that I cannot endure.First of all,the salary has proved to be much lower than you originally promised,and I have a large family to support.In addition,the officce is located in the downtown area,yet I live in the suburbs,so it is exhausting for me to spend over three hours commuting every day.Nost importantly,I feel rather disappointed as I have never been given any really important task.Therefore,I sincerely hope that you approve of my resignation. Thanks for having given me a chance to work here.I am sorry for any inconvenience caused. Yours sincerely, Zhang Wei
人气:212发布:2013-05-17
人气:62发布:2013-11-22
人气:53发布:2013-12-08