2014年初中毕业升学考试英语作文集锦159:学生进网吧

作者词汇表达较为熟练，高级词汇使用不是很多；正确句子比例很高，但需多多加强从句的使用；上下文衔接欠佳，文章层次欠清晰，建议加强连接词和衔接词的积累。

Good afternoon, class. Today let’s talk about getting on-line. Many students like getting on-line very much. They can learn how to use the modern machine computer. They can get more information. It can make them clever to play different kinds of games. But some students spend too much time playing games. Some even make friends on-line. They write too many letters to each other. It takes them too much time. So they do worse and worse in their lessons. I think they mustn’t get on-line. When they are studying at school. They can do it in summer or winter holidays.