简单句比重过高,另应加强复杂句的练习;作者词汇表达较为熟练,高级词汇使用不是很多;不能熟练使用过渡词,文章结构不严谨。
Good afternoon, class. Today let’s talk about getting on-line. Many students like getting on-line very much. They can learn how to use the modern computer. They can get more information. It can make them clever to play different kinds of games. But some students spend too much time playing games. Some even make friends on-line. They write too many letters to each other. It takes them too much time. So they do worse and worse in their lessons. I think they mustn’t get on-line. When they are studying at school,they can do it in summer or winter holidays.
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