小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

文中用词稍显贫乏，单词拼写方面也要加强；建议加强积累过渡词和衔接词的积累，文章结构不严谨；部分句子偏简单，注意有错误的句子。

i have a good friend named shi tongyu. she likes to be beauty. she always asks her mother to comb a snowwhite hair style. she likes colorful clothing with lace things. she spends long times on choosing dress, sometimes it makes her mother angry, but she never give up. she concern about beauty things what makes her happy.