新课标八年级下学期期末测试冲刺复习专题书面表达（2）：给大卫的一封信

作者句法不错，但是文章整体句子稍微偏短；文中词汇使用较丰富，高级词汇使用要加强；文章结构不够严谨，应增加过程性词汇的使用。

Dear David, I am very glad to receive your letter yesterday. As I learnt from you letter,you will soon come to Lanzhou to study Chinese and also want to know how to learn it.I can give you some good advice.Learning a foreign language is a little more difficult to everyone.One of the most important thing to study Chinese is that you must go into the Chinese environment.The more you make mistakes,the more you will speak better.Reading some good books with you the same level is able to improve your Chinese as well.While you are speaking English in your own life,however,try to speak Chinese.Shortly afterwards,you will set up a new record about your language system.You will be appreciating the whole thing you work hard.At present,don't worry about anything.If you are caught in any questions you don't understand,tell me,I will help you. Sincerely Your friend,Iris.