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2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:38浏览次数:71635
要求:
Suppose a foreign friend of yours is going to visit your hometown,what is the most interestingplace you would like to take him/her to see and why?
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I believe a beautiful city in China is my hometown BoZhou.As a matter of fact,it is a history city.There are many famous history creator in BoZhou,such as CaoCao,HuaTuo,LaoZi,ZhuangZi.There are many nice places to visit.Because HuaTuo is a history doctor,there are many beautiful flowers to cure people.When the spring comes,many people come here to enjoy the flowers.Perhaps,they will buy some wine.The wine of BoZhou has a long history.It smells good,tastes good,it is good.BoZhou lies in the northern of AnHui province and the middle of China.So it is the sight of palin.The people is friendly.We will be happy ,if someone who is from other place come here. Welcome to my hometown!

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