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【精析】
这是一份简历。和求职信类似,简历一般包括个人情况,教育背景,个人能力,目标职业等信息。在写简历时,一定要实事求是,不可夸大其词,要特别注意突出自己符合招聘信息的能力。另外,还要注意简历的格式和语言,格式要整齐明了,语言要简洁有力。
简单句比重过高,另应加强复杂句的练习;作者能较熟练地使用词汇表达,一些高级词汇的使用也比较灵活;全文结构不够严谨,文中很少使用衔接词和过渡词。
Resume Name:Li Ming Sex:male Date of birth:June 15th,1986 Marital status:Single Job objective:foreign trade clerk Education background I graduated from Foreign Language Department , Beifang University in 2008 with excellent scores in all subjects. Personal skills I have a command of English,and I am skill in listening,speaking,reading and writing.My second foreign language is German .And I have acquired basic skills on speaking German.Besides, I am families with the process of foreign trade. Hobbies I like playing basketball,singing and watching movies.