加强一些长句和复杂句的使用;文中词汇表达多样性要加强,但请仔细检查词汇的拼写;文章结构欠严谨,基本没有衔接成分。
Dear Mr.Johnson We have already accpet 30000 things made in your company at 22 on 12.According to our signing of the No.35 order.Prducts shoud have 35000.The other 500 prdoucts we have not accpet until today.Please check your product list. We are looking forward to your early reply!Thanks! Wang Haiyang 2008.12.23