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内容：本人在12月15日到22日在纽约举行的展览会期间了解到贵公司产品号为5670的新产品，非常感兴趣，请贵方发给我们一份价格单和说明书。感谢贵方的合作，希望我们可以建立贸易关系。
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1．price list and instruction价格单和说明书
2．establish business relationship建立贸易关系
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Dear manager, I'm Hubin from China.Last month ,when I was in NewYork'sexhibition during 12~15 in December,I found your company's new product numbered5670 and much interested in that product.So I write here to hope that you can send us one price list and instruction.The address of our E-mail is:Hubin@163.com.And we sincerely hope that we can establish business relationship with you and thanks for your coopertion.
