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作者高级词汇积累做的很棒,但有个别拼写错误;句式变化较为明显,另外句法层面做的不错;全文结构较为严谨。
Meaness or Smartness While many students lacking independence from their parents, economiacally and psychologically,many students have beeen keeping themselves going for discounts, coupons, group-buy deals and so on to release the burden on their family.It is undoubtful that such behaviour represents the students' gratitude to their family.However,merely paying attention to seeking for cheaper things does not fit to be called a smart customer.It is crucial to do such things in a limination to reach the goal. Seeking for cheaper things is prabably harmful to our physical health.Since the major expanse of the students is on the food, clothes and such fundamental things required by our daily life, and those things are also the major scale of saving money. Going for cheap things may result in health problem,since cheapness has something with bad qualities.Saving excessive money from those may suffer the students hunger and coldness, and then may even cause much severe illness, like penumonia.Obviously,such behaviour has nothing with smartness. Seeking for cheaper things also possibly does harm to our mental growth.Students' major mission is to equip themselves with all-rounded knowledge, not to saving the minor money.Some students are caught in buying ill-printed textbooks and reference books for the cheaper prices,harmful to the education.Meanwhile,cheap entertaining way does worse than that to the mental health.It is the evidence that a smart customer will not seek for cheaper things only. Seeking for cheaper things in a limination is worth of encouragement,while paying the whole attention to this only may harm students physically and mentally. Students can take an occassional job to release the economy burden,but merely seeking for cheap things can not be called a smart customer.