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文章在句法方面做的很棒,从句和复杂句的使用不错;文章词汇表达丰富,高级词汇积累做的也很棒;全文结构较为严谨。
Seeking for cheapness While many students lacking independence from their parents, economically and psychologically,many students have been keeping themselves going for discounts, coupons, group-buy deals and so on to release the burden on their family.It is undoubtful that the behaviour represents the students' gratitude to their family.However,merely paying attention to seeking for cheaper things does not fit to be called a smart customer.It is crucial to do such things in a limitation to reach the goal. Seeking for cheaper things prabably does harm to our physical health.Since the major expanse of the students is on the food, clothes and such fundamental things required by our daily life, and those things are also the major scale of saving money. Going for cheap things may result in health problem,since cheapness has something with bad qualities.Saving excessive money from those may lead to the students' suffering hunger and coldness, and then may even cause severer illness, like pneumonia.Obviously,the behaviour has nothing with smartness. Seeking for cheaper things also possibly does harm to our mental growth.Students' major mission is to equip themselves with all-rounded knowledge, not to saving the minor money.Some students are caught in buying ill-printed textbooks and reference books for cheaper prices,harmful to the education.Meanwhile,cheap way of entertaining does worse than that to the mental health.It is the evidence that a smart customer will not seek for cheaper things only. Seeking for cheaper things in a limitation is worthy of encouragement,while paying the whole attention to this only may harm students physically and mentally. Students can take an occasional job to release the economic burden,but merely seeking for cheap things cannot be called a smart customer.