2012年10月13日雅思大作文真题:如何看待社会多元化

语句间的衔接成分用的不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；作者词汇基础扎实，拼写也很棒；作者句法基本功不错，可适当增加从句的使用。

With the development of modern science and technology, especially the advancement of communication and transportation, the population migration and cultural integration has become a new trend for the human being, consequently the social diversity and the problems brought by the diversity are catching our eyesight. Firstly, let’s highlight the reason why such a social diversity come true. In the first half of last century, the world experienced two world wars, and after that, the human being enjoys an relatively and largely peaceful period of time, during which the information technology (IT), telecommunication, means of transportation and various media have achieved profound progress. The progress in these fields significantly reshaped our mind, our life and our society and even the whole world’s future. For example, more and more population are traveling or migrating than before; the financial capital is also being exchanged and relocated by the individuals or organizations at a unprecedented speed through the invisible webs; meanwhile the cultural exchange among the races of people are undergoing exuberantly. Therefore, every corner of the world today can not be seen as a insular island any more. Social diversity, as an irreversible trend, will go further, but its negative effects appears gradually and are forcing the society to address or combat against. One extreme example is about the religious extremists. They are increasingly applying the internet and other modern media to disseminate their thoughts and belief, even provoke incidents around the world. The tools and media serving the social diversity and convenience of our daily life, now are being used for anti-human activities. It is really a pity for that. However, the negative effects of social diversity cannot prevent us from seeing its positive effects: due to diversified culture exchange, the customs of Chinese Spring Festival has spread out to the whole world and it enriches the locals’ life with its beautiful and colorful contents, numerous foods, lion dancing, dragon dancing, etc. At the same time, we can also see the increasing number of Chinese youth to celebrate Christmas and other western festivals. All these activities and events shortens the distance between distinctive peoples and deepens their mutual understanding, promotes their economy’s development... In conclusion, the social diversity trend is a irreversible tide which has been changed and will continue changing many aspects of our life. While we are tolerating its bad influence, we have to be confident in combating and conquering it later, and we must expand and promote its good effects to the maximum extent in all possible ways.