2015年高考作文优秀范文：如何学好中文

采用了恰当的衔接手法，层次清晰；从句和复杂句用的不错，但部分句子还有一些小问题；作者能较熟练地使用丰富的词汇，但请加强单词拼写的检查。

In the past,people often takes a holiday of stay at home visiting friends and relatives or going shopping to buy a lot of deliciouse food new clothes and so on ever go to the park to have a good time.Maybe it is the best way people to spent of a happy new years time. Noweday, everyone rathe have they holiday to have a visiting or climb the mountain than stay at home ,it seems that people have more way to enjoy they holiday . But what's the reason lead to this problem? In my opinions, the best reason is that in the present people have a better life than before so that they have more money to improve their life quality on the other hand alse showes our county have a fast develop.