文章词汇表达比较灵活,高级词汇的使用要继续加强;采用了简单的衔接手法,行文流畅;可适当增加从句的使用,注意文中的一些小错误。
It is unwise to put all eggs in one basket.Every thing has advantages and disadvantages,which is the same as the old saying,"Every coin has two sides."It is rue.Life is just like a long road where we will face hundreds of thousand difficulties one after one.So the situation will come up frequently.Our first solution to the problem doesn't make effort.Thus,it is urgent for us to have a planB.