2015年高考作文优秀范文：如何学好中文

采用了恰当的衔接手法，层次清晰；从句使用很不错，再接再厉；请注意词汇表达的多样性及拼写错误，尤其加强高级词汇的使用。

In the past,the holiday is often at home to visit friends and relatives or going shopping to buy a lot of delicious food new clothing and so on ever go to the park to have a good time.Maybe it is the best way person to take their New Year's time. Nowaday,everyone rathe takes they holiday time to have a visiting or climb the mountain than stay at home,it seems that people have more way to enjoy they holiday. But what's the reason lead to this problem? In my opinions, the best reason is that in the present people have a better life than before so that they have more money to improve their life quality on the other hand alse showes our county have a fast develop.