2015年高考作文优秀范文：如何学好中文

语句间的衔接成分用的不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；作者句法很棒，合理使用了复杂句；词汇表达较灵活准确，高级词汇使用过少，另外注意文中个别的拼写错误。

In the past,the holiday is often at home to visit friends and relatives or going shopping to buy a lot of delicious food new clothing and so on ever go to the park to have a good time.Maybe it is the best way person to take their New Year's time. Nowadays,everyone rather takes their holiday times to have a visiting or climb the mountain than stay at home,it seems that people have more way to enjoy they holiday. But what's the reason lead to this problem? In my opinions, the best reason is that in the present people have a better life than before so that they have more money to improve their life quality on the other hand alse showes our county have a fast develop.