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In the past,the holiday is often at home to visit friends and relatives or going shopping to buy a lot of delicious food new clothing and so on ever go to the park to have a good time.Maybe it is the best way person to take their New Year's time. Nowadays,everyone rather takes holiday times to have a visiting or climb the mountain than stay at home,it seems that people have more way to enjoy their holiday. But what's the reason lead to this problem? In my opinions, the best reason is that in the present people have a better life than before so that they have more money to improve their life quality on the other hand alse shows our county have a fast develop.