2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

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I am glad to introduce you some beautiful city in China.In my opinion,Beijing is the best city in China.I believe that you must have heared about this city.The Great Wall is very surprised you.Accprding to a Chinese saying, no visit to Beijing is complete if you miss seeing the Great Wall or dining on Roast Duck,and i think you must intrested in it. Do you know the Summer Place? As we all know that wes destoried by war.but now it has a wonder of incomplete.if you want to buy something,let's go to the Wangfujing street,where full of Beijing atmosphere.you will find what you want. I love my hometown,and I hope you can visit her beautiful with you eyes!